Down in the Playground (Gen, PG)
Jul. 17th, 2006 04:49 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
pixel_0Title: Down in the Playground
Rating: Light PG
Category: Gen oneshot
Word Count: 1106
Characters: Dean-centric, with Sam, John, and OCs
Spoilers: None
Author’s Notes: Written for prompt 6: Inferiority Complex for the psych_30 challenge.
psych_30 challenge.Disclaimer: The following characters and situations are used without permission of the creators, owners, and further affiliates of the Warner Bros television show, Supernatural, to whom they rightly belong. I claim only what is mine, and I make no money off what is theirs.
Inferiority Complex: an individual’s belief that they are unworthy; the condition of having low self-esteem
Somewhere on the playground, a child trips, a child stumbles, falls from levels too high, and Dean watches. Watches the child topple to chubby hands and knobby knees onto jungle gym gravel. He watches, but doesn’t catch him. Cannot catch him. Cannot break from frozen limbs to run and catch himself. Catch the child that is him just years much too young as he watches his life and how he fell.
He stands away from the jungle gym and watches his juvenile self cry. In his pockets, his hands are sweaty, and he fingers some loose change. Change that feels like a quarter. A quarter and a nickel. Thirty cents left over from a purchase he doesn’t even remember. A purchase that probably didn’t matter. Not that much ever matters.
A teacher approaches himself in the child form with short, clipped strides, and her navy skirt snaps in the breeze. His name is single syllable of definite annoyance on her pursed lips. Lips that spout frustration within the construction papered and dusty white chalked walls of her classroom every day. Why is he outside? What about his schoolwork? Doesn’t he realize he’s jeopardizing his future? Doesn’t he know that he’s breaking the rules? Doesn’t he know? Understand? Doesn’t he?
He—younger he, not the older one standing in a fog of confusion off to the side—tries not to cry. He wipes his nose on the back of his hand, and the teacher scoffs. Scoffs at his shabby clothing, and the way his hair is cut a little bit too crooked and hangs sloppily over his watery eyes. But, he doesn’t stand like she wants, only stares at his hands curled into stone and gravel. His silence, his staring at anything but her, annoys her enough to send her turning into the school building without looking back. Let the troublemakers tend to themselves, she thinks. Let them. Just let them.
She does not help him to his feet.
His father comes to his younger self, scolding and criticizing. He shouldn’t be crying. It’s just a scrape. A scrape on the knee and a scratch on the hand. You’re better than that. Cry when there is something to cry about. I didn’t raise my son to be a crier. Do you hear me, Dean Winchester? Do you? Besides what is he doing at school anyway, when there are better things to be done at home? There’s target practice, Latin to read, this to be done and that to be finished and…and. And everything that’s not this.
John does not help him to his feet.
The other children come. They tease, and they taunt. Taunt his tears and mock his muddy face. They circle him like vultures picking off their prey, and when he buries his head into his arms on the ground to inhale the sweet scent of grass, they kick gravel on him. “Stupid boy, stupid boy,” they sing. “Stupid boy with a stupid face.” He has stopped crying now, but he keeps his head protected. His stupid face, they say. A face his mother once kissed every night before he went to bed. No one has kissed—touched, held, loved—his face since she died.
The children do not help him to his feet.
Then he is alone. The playground is completely silent, and he finally lifts his head. His young eyes see his older self standing across the quieted yard, but neither of them says anything. He wants to go to his child self, pick him up and carry him inside. Carry him inside and clean his face off, wash his hands where the gravel has gotten under the skin and let him know that everything’s going to be okay.
It won’t get better in the future, but it won’t be any worse. He’ll learn how to adapt, he wants to tell the little boy. He’ll remember the teachers and the kids, the ones who doubted and the ones who hated. He’ll remember his father’s words that he was never good enough, and how that pushed him to be better—stronger—than what anyone ever expected. He’ll remember, and he’ll learn, and then, even though he’ll never be the best, he’ll be okay.
But, Dean stands away from the boy, as if touching him will make the pain come flaring back, reminding him of what he was—what he still is beneath the layers he wears and paints and builds. The crying boy—it was him, wasn’t it? No, not wasn’t. Isn’t. The boy is not him. He has changed, he’s better than that. He—
He clutches his face in his hands that are no longer child chubby, but masculine callused, and he bends his head. There is nothing more for him to argue against. He knows that he still is the little boy, crying on the playground while the world does not help him to his feet. The world instead leaves him to cry in tears and gravel. Alone. So alone.
Then, somewhere on the playground, a child trips, a child stumbles, falls from levels too high, and Dean watches. Watches the child topple to chubby hands and knobby knees onto jungle gym gravel. He watches, and he catches him.
In Dean’s—no longer an adult, just a child—kid of single digit year old arms, he holds onto the boy tightly. Sam looks up at him through brown bangs and smiles. Smiles a little fearfully and hesitantly, but happily that his brother stopped him before he fell. They’re both crouched close to the ground, and as Sam slides back to the grass, Dean rises to his adolescent feet. He looks up at the sky with its full, white clouds. He thinks of the world and how it never helped him, and he thinks of all that pushed him down and ate him up.
So, he turns to Sam, babyish Sam still crouching on the ground and looking up at him. He turns to Sam and extends his hand, and he forces a smile through his adult mind to his childish lips.
Sam will never be able to understand what he feels in the shame and pain that circle around him when he lets his guard down for the slightest moment. Dean never wants Sam to feel that. He only wants Sam to feel happiness and love, the things that were stolen from them and never returned. So, even though no one ever helped him, ever cared enough to see him through the dark, Dean extends his hand, and he helps Sam to his feet.
As he always has. As he always will.
End
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Date: 2006-07-17 09:50 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-17 10:45 pm (UTC)Thanks for posting this; I hope you continue to write more in this fandom.
DC
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Date: 2006-07-18 12:02 am (UTC)<3 Dean to infinity...and you for writing this ^^.
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Date: 2006-07-18 12:52 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-18 12:58 am (UTC)Girl, you continue to astound me with your incredible fics! There are periods when I'm in an emotional state, but today was not one of them. But, man, did you manage to make me choke up with this one. OMG, I hated John in this one, and I guess it resonated with me because my father did the same thing with me. He always used to say, "You wanna cry? I'll give you something to cry about!" I want to say that I resent that, but in some ways I don't, because it made me stronger and not a crybaby, which is actually something i detest in other people. Anyway! I know that's how Dean turned out, but he still aches for that hurty little boy that he was, and he makes up for it by "saving" Sam. Wahhh! *heart wibbles and melts*
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Date: 2006-07-18 04:53 am (UTC)I think we call carry a bit of a lonely child inside (or else it's just me), so that resonates with a lot of people. This? Just...I have no words.
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Date: 2006-07-18 09:32 pm (UTC)Favorite lines:
Scoffs at his shabby clothing, and the way his hair is cut a little bit too crooked and hangs sloppily over his watery eyes.
Great description there, as it gives us visual proof of the messed up childhood Dean and Sam had. Not enough money (or care on John's part) to get them good clothes and decent haircuts. *hugs both boys*
He thinks of the world and how it never helped him, and he thinks of all that pushed him down and ate him up.
Love that sentence, especially the end of it, about "all that pushed him down and ate him up." Stark and beautiful.
So, even though no one ever helped him, ever cared enough to see him through the dark, Dean extends his hand, and he helps Sam to his feet.
As he always has. As he always will.
Such a good big brother. *pets Dean*
Thanks for a lovely read.
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Date: 2006-07-19 03:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-19 03:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-19 03:38 am (UTC)I think you're in good company on that one. *looks around at majority of fandom* See? You're not alone. ;)
Thank you very much for the kind feedback. I really appreciate it. :)
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Date: 2006-07-19 03:40 am (UTC)Thank you, though, for the feedback. Your icon fits perfectly. :)
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Date: 2006-07-19 03:43 am (UTC)OMG, I hated John in this one, and I guess it resonated with me because my father did the same thing with me. He always used to say, "You wanna cry? I'll give you something to cry about!" I want to say that I resent that, but in some ways I don't, because it made me stronger and not a crybaby, which is actually something i detest in other people.
Ditto completely. My dad did the same thing. Granted, I'm more apt to just suck it up now and not cry over the little things, but it really ticked me off when I was just a kid and I had scraped my knee. So, yeah, John hit a nerve wtih me too. I don't want to go off on the whole "he's a bad father" rant because I really don't think he is...I just think he had some moments when he could've been a little bit nicer and realized his kids were just...kids.
*helps put heart back together*
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Date: 2006-07-19 03:45 am (UTC)I think we call carry a bit of a lonely child inside (or else it's just me), so that resonates with a lot of people.
Well, I know it rang true for me in a lot of areas. Maybe not the same way Dean did, but being teased by your peers in elementary school or not meeting your parents' expectations. Just things like those that I can personally remember--and actually thought about, to be honest when writing this. It's really painful in those ways to realize that we all have that bit of hurt child inside.
Thank you so much for such kind feedback. I truly appreciate it. :)
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Date: 2006-07-19 03:47 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-19 03:47 am (UTC)For some reason, I have this image of them being the children that nobody really wanted to play with or be friends with because they didn't have the best clothing or the newest toys. John--as far as we know--didn't work the most well-paying jobs, and being a single parent had to be difficult. As much as I don't want to point the "bad father" finger at John, I think he probably did sometimes care more about the hunts than the appearance of the boys.
Thank you so much for such wonderful feedback. I always enjoy getting comments from you because you say exactly what you like, which is a pleasure to know. So, thank you again. :)
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Date: 2006-07-19 03:49 am (UTC)Haven't seen you around much, but it looks like from your journal that life's been pretty busy. Everything going well?
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Date: 2006-07-19 04:13 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-19 04:19 am (UTC)You're not only in the fandom thing, either. I feel all "blah" about everything involving fandom lately, so I've been focing these psych_30 fics down my throat just so nobody can point a finger and go, "Pixel's not writing" and then try to take them away from me.
I've talked to a few other people who feel the same way. I'm not sure if it's just the "summer blah" without any new episodes or what. :P I sort of miss my squeeing with happiness days.
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Date: 2006-07-19 01:50 pm (UTC)Yeah, I think that's probably accurate. And they were probably on out outside looking in not only because of their physical appearance, but their personalities, too. Knowing the things they knew had to affect how they interacted with people.
I always enjoy getting comments from you because you say exactly what you like, which is a pleasure to know. So, thank you again. :)
You're welcome. My pleasure. :)
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Date: 2006-07-19 05:16 pm (UTC)You know, it's complicated with John. I don't think he's a bad father, either, and he was thrust into playing the mother/father roles to his two young sons, which would be an overwhelming responsibility for anyone. In the pilot we see that he was a loving father, even if just for a few moments. But I vacillate between liking him and not liking him because we see the obvious effects of his behavior on his sons. I guess he's what we'd call a flawed character. ;) Which makes for good telly!
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Date: 2006-07-20 02:07 am (UTC)I don't think he's a bad father, either, and he was thrust into playing the mother/father roles to his two young sons, which would be an overwhelming responsibility for anyone.
Oh definitely. And it's not like he got to the mother/father role by any happy circumstances. He just had his wife taken from him in one of the worst ways imaginable. Undoubtedly, it'd wreak havoc on a person's psyche.
In the pilot we see that he was a loving father, even if just for a few moments.
I think he still is a loving father...he just has different ways of showing it, perhaps. Maybe after what happened to Mary, he learned that he needed to be strong enough to deal with everything that life had thrown at him. But, I should probably stop rambling. John is a character I could discuss all night and then some. ;)
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Date: 2006-07-20 02:19 am (UTC)Oh, most likely indeed. It couldn't have been easy to go to school and pretend to be normal, while they have to move from city to city with their dad after a demon that killed their mother. Although, I've always wondered why Sam went after normalcy instead of Dean. It seems to me that Dean, who had experienced a brief period of normalcy, would have went after it more than Sam did. But, now I'm rambling... :P
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Date: 2006-07-20 01:24 pm (UTC)An interesting point. But I think that Dean was so strongly indoctrinated into the whole hunting mentality (snapping to attention whenever John wanted him to, apparently feeling drawn to saving people from an early age [his comment in "Devil's Trap" about wanting to be a fireman]) that it just didn't occur to him, at least not as strongly.
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Date: 2006-08-24 12:04 am (UTC)he caught Sam!
*kicks shit out john*
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Date: 2006-08-24 02:13 am (UTC)Now, now, don't hurt John. *pulls him away* I still need him for my stories. *tsk, tsk*
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Date: 2006-08-24 08:18 am (UTC)*runs after you* he was a right dickhead and you know it
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Date: 2006-10-08 11:11 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-10-10 04:50 pm (UTC)Thank you very much for the feedback.